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Front Page Draft & Feedback
On this page is 2 drafts that I made. Accompanied by these is feedback that I received from my peers.
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Will try to improve/develop/incorporate in my work=
One of the people who gave me feedback stating 'I don't know what afrobeats is', made me even more determined to have such a genre on the market for the mass market audience.
Year 13 Feedback
Having received feedback from the year13, I realised that their comments were mainly trying to simplify the creativity of the magazine which personally, I did not want to do. There are also comments that have been raised, that I can no longer take action on as it is too far into my project.
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