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Contents Page Draft & Feedback
On this page is a draft that I made, accompanied by this is feedback that I received from my peers.
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Will try to improve/develop/incorporate in my work=
Again someone gave me feedback stating that they are unaware of the genre. This made me even more determined to have such a genre on the market for the mass market audience.
Year 13 Feedback
Again their comments were trying to simplify the creativity of the magazine which I did not want to do.
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